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Hey just wanna get this off my chest. Authorrrr, plss stop referencing future events it kills the tension and the gravity of the situation.

For example the author writes "in the future person A became part of their troops and got into a love triangle with person B but that is a story for another day" Stopppp it pls . this would work if it was a slice of life type of story but not a kingdom building war story. (They did this in the middle of a battle by the way)

All this does is remove the suspense of "what if this person dies in the war, or what if the country gets massive losses"

I know the chances of that is slim but the possibility of that happening keeps the tension and the suspense alive.

tldr: treat this as more of a slice of life than kingdom building i find it more enjoyable that way

ps: if you like kindom building i would recommend goblin kingdom
 
Hey just wanna get this off my chest. Authorrrr, plss stop referencing future events it kills the tension and the gravity of the situation.

For example the author writes "in the future person A became part of their troops and got into a love triangle with person B but that is a story for another day" Stopppp it pls . this would work if it was a slice of life type of story but not a kingdom building war story. (They did this in the middle of a battle by the way)

All this does is remove the suspense of "what if this person dies in the war, or what if the country gets massive losses"

I know the chances of that is slim but the possibility of that happening keeps the tension and the suspense alive.

tldr: treat this as more of a slice of life than kingdom building i find it more enjoyable that way

ps: if you like kindom building i would recommend goblin kingdom
I think you send your opinion to the wrong place. The author and publisher will never set foot here to read your comment. If they do, we are in deep trouble.
 
I think you send your opinion to the wrong place. The author and publisher will never set foot here to read your comment. If they do, we are in deep trouble.
hahaha i know its just something i wanted to let out, making that comment lightened my mood enough to get back into reading the story, its a fun story just wished that the author wouldn't kill the tension
 

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